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A Letter for A Bottle by ~autumn-wind:iconautumn-wind:



The place where they met,
Pour out like sand from bottle,
Dipping a hole in it,
Covered again,
By the love.

Hauntingly tear stricken faces,
Raindrops that seemed like spherical,
Beautiful vulnerable faces,
That was oblivious to the picture.

There was this sea of empty bottles,
Where you used to put love letters,
Imagining words written fiercely,
For hidden passion.

Still indescribable,
It floated among waters,
Engraved with tulips and lilies,
Everything from white to white.

Your fingers itself,
Lighted candles to burn off papers,
After folding into boats of memories,
Which was gone by the currents of winds.

Only one story,
Repeated centuries over and over again,
Yet it remained as poignant as possible,
Yet it was unbreakable.

Till the end,
Everyone remembers,
When she writes,
Scent of salty breeze and lilac paper mixed,
Her bottle still laid somewhere there.
©2006-2009 ~autumn-wind
:iconautumn-wind:

Author's Comments

This is something I did few days back when I was feeling unhappy.
I'm so nervous now!!! Maths exam is tomorrow...
SO tensed. =3
Thanks for reading and comments please.

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:iconiamdeathlock:
You write very beautifully. I love this peice and I'm adding it to my faves.

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The Quill, dream it, write it, share it.

Deatlock of the Netherlands offspring of Iliad and Stone. Dweller of 21 years maker of arts.
:iconredscream:
Very thoughtul and it creates some nice images, I like the 4th and 5th stanzas. Good piece :D
And good luck with your test!
:iconredscream:
Very thoughtul and it creates some nice images, I like the 4th and 5th stanzas. Good piece :D
And good luck with your test!
:iconcheriblossom:
One day I'm gonna try that =P write down stuff then put it in the water and see who finds it. =P

*favs as usual* Ur work is always so....so....*insert word*

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icon by XingZ @ dA
:iconautumn-wind:
Thank you so much! :D

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They say 'look into the future.' But I always realized, the past made me what I am.

Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
:iconautumn-wind:
Wee~ Thanks~ I love those stanzas too. ^^
The Maths exam I went through today was horrible. =.= ahhaha

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They say 'look into the future.' But I always realized, the past made me what I am.

Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
:iconautumn-wind:
Yeahhh you go try. XD hahhah in my country, hardly can find a nearby sea in the city. >.>
Thankies for support! :glomp:

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They say 'look into the future.' But I always realized, the past made me what I am.

Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
:iconiamdeathlock:
Your welcome :blackrose:

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The Quill, dream it, write it, share it.

Deatlock of the Netherlands offspring of Iliad and Stone. Dweller of 21 years maker of arts.
:iconredscream:
Your welcome... and too bad about the exam have a :cookie:

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