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A Letter for A Bottle by ~autumn-wind:iconautumn-wind:



The place where they met,
Pour out like sand from bottle,
Dipping a hole in it,
Covered again,
By the love.

Hauntingly tear stricken faces,
Raindrops that seemed like spherical,
Beautiful vulnerable faces,
That was oblivious to the picture.

There was this sea of empty bottles,
Where you used to put love letters,
Imagining words written fiercely,
For hidden passion.

Still indescribable,
It floated among waters,
Engraved with tulips and lilies,
Everything from white to white.

Your fingers itself,
Lighted candles to burn off papers,
After folding into boats of memories,
Which was gone by the currents of winds.

Only one story,
Repeated centuries over and over again,
Yet it remained as poignant as possible,
Yet it was unbreakable.

Till the end,
Everyone remembers,
When she writes,
Scent of salty breeze and lilac paper mixed,
Her bottle still laid somewhere there.
©2006-2010 ~autumn-wind
:iconautumn-wind:

Author's Comments

This is something I did few days back when I was feeling unhappy.
I'm so nervous now!!! Maths exam is tomorrow...
SO tensed. =3
Thanks for reading and comments please.

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:iconcheriblossom:
lol you don't find a sea here either haha!!!You gotta gooo allll the way up to sydney just to go to a beach >.<" I read Meeting point! update missy =P

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:iconautumn-wind:
weee! yay!

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They say 'look into the future.' But I always realized, the past made me what I am.

Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
:iconautumn-wind:
yes mam! wait for one mroe week XD

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They say 'look into the future.' But I always realized, the past made me what I am.

Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
:icondeathrages:
Hi, nice piece u got here ^^ I like the last part,


Scent of salty breeze and lilac paper mixed,
Her bottle still laid somewhere there.


Gimme a kind of lonely sense... lolz... sorry for suddenly appearing, just saw u on TheLastStanza...

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Errr... I dunno how to sign from here =.=
:iconautumn-wind:
Oh hahaha I'm happy to you liked this. XD
Thanks a lot.

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They say 'look into the future.' But I always realized, the past made me what I am.

Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
:iconamion-hacker:
+++Very beautiphul+++

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:iconautumn-wind:
Thanks for the comments and the fave! :D

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They say 'look into the future.' But I always realized, the past made me what I am.

Dazzling bursts of rain, I fall and falter, watching the light scatter stunningly around me; I am alive.
:iconamion-hacker:
You're welcome :)

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